t4upl's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Valley]

Take away that raider, bird and miner and let viewer just enjoy the scenery.

[Dead City]

Carriage is to sharp, its stands out too much. A small blur on lantern would be nice as well.

About the lantern:
- It's day. Why would the raider keep it on? <illogical>
- Let's say it's on anyway. If it's a day it wouldn't be so visible. Full saturation yellow could be used if it was a night.

[Death]

Handle of "sword" is too short

LuxiferxLegion responds:

Or is it too long?

[Batlord]

Love the style. Gothic novel went online comic.

[Inside My Mind]

Love the right top corner. As for the rest not so much.

zephyo responds:

holy shit my ego

[The Blood Compass]

Isn't that blood too bright?

jouste responds:

it's a magic compass! of course it's going to be brighter!

thanks for the high score!

*highfives*

[Mega Feraligatr]

Nice as concept art but it seems to be missing "the power".

[Ghost Atom]

Needs graphical improvement. Love the way the ghost move. Blood spill is too big.

[Fulfillment of Ritual]

Things I dislike:
- Clouds are over artsy. A simple clouded sky would have much better impact.
- Heart hole seems out of mood and seems to be too frontal. I understand the concept but it should be more merciless iron cold...-ish.
- maybe more blurred light at parts of chain which are further from viewer.
- Face should be stricter.

Likes:
- People
- Texture of material - big like!

[Jaedus | Ivory Mask]

Requires more lighteffects on mask as it stands out form the rest of the pic. Reminds me of Elesh Norn's church. Looks much more like a high priest or cleric than a general.

gavinvalentine responds:

I'm glad you brought up Elesh Norn. I'm a huge fan of Magic: The Gathering and I would love to do art for them sometime soon.